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Scriptnotes Podcast - Episode 709 Summary
Overview
- Podcast Title: Scriptnotes Podcast
- Hosts: John August and Craig Mazin
- Episode Title: 709 - Live at the Austin Film Festival 2025
- Guests: Pamela Ribon (Writer) and Anthony Sparks (Showrunner)
- Topics Discussed: Character relationships, building a writing career later in life, listener questions on various screenwriting topics.
Key Themes and Discussions
Character Relationships
- Importance of Relationships: Discussion about the significance of character relationships in storytelling, emphasizing that all characters have relationships that affect the narrative.
- Two-Sided Relationships: Highlighted the need to focus not just on what characters want but also on what they desire from one another, which creates conflict and depth.
- Power Dynamic: Explored how power dynamics in relationships shift throughout the story. Characters often begin with different levels of power that can change over time (e.g., examples like "Planes, Trains and Automobiles").
Insights from Guests
- Pamela Ribon: Shared insights from her work on films like *Nimona* and *Moana*, discussing how character relationships evolve and the challenges of aligning characters’ motivations and perceptions.
- Anthony Sparks: Discussed his experience transitioning from acting in *Stomp* to writing and showrunning, emphasizing the importance of writing characters that force change in one another.
Building a Writing Career Later in Life
- Career Transitions: Sparks shared his personal journey of transitioning from acting to writing, advocating for the idea that it’s never too late to start a writing career.
- Persistence: The importance of persistence in the face of rejection and maintaining a passion for storytelling was underscored.
Listener Questions
- Getting Unstuck: Various strategies were discussed for overcoming writer’s block, including:
- Taking Breaks: Stepping away from the script to gain perspective.
- Logical Problem-Solving: Identifying the logical next steps for characters.
- Engaging with Others: Seeking external feedback and perspective.
- Exposition vs. Mystery: Discussed the challenges of balancing exposition in scripts, especially in short films, and the importance of engaging the audience without overwhelming them with backstory.
- AI in Sizzle Reels: The hosts expressed concerns about using AI to create sizzle reels, suggesting it might reflect a lack of commitment to the craft and discourage genuine creativity.
Book Announcement
- Scriptnotes Book: The hosts revealed plans for their upcoming book, detailing that it will compile insights from their podcast and include contributions from various industry experts. They encouraged pre-orders to help promote it.
Conclusion
- The episode showcased the dynamic interplay between character relationships, career development within the writing industry, and the creative process. It highlighted the importance of seeking feedback, maintaining flexibility in writing, and the transformative power of storytelling.
Links
- [Pamela Ribon](https://pamie.com/)
- [Anthony Sparks](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anthony_Sparks)
- [Austin Film Festival](https://austinfilmfestival.com/)
- [Preorder the Scriptnotes Book!](https://scriptnotesbook.com/)
- [Writer Emergency Pack](https://writeremergency.com/)
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0:04Thank you.
0:30Are you guys being paid for this? I would say. You know, bringing in the warm-up act to sort of, like, get them in the mood, that was really good. It was worth all the hundreds of dollars. Yeah, that, wow. That was great. Thank you for that. Sure. Hey. Thank you, guys. So, I would say it's especially impressive that you're here. Not only were we scheduled against a Rian Johnson premiere. Also, did you hear this? The Major League Baseball scheduled a World Series game. I'm telling you this now. They scheduled a World Series game against us. Apparently it's happening at this moment. Yes. And I have been told in no uncertain terms that I cannot check the score during this.
1:12However, I can tell you right now it is tied up to two. What is it exciting? Now. In the top of the sixth in Toronto. What I will tell you is that people will think, oh, John doesn't like baseball. But the truth is I like movies about baseball. I like the episode of Moneyball. We recorded a deep dive on Moneyball with Taffy Burdester-Achner. So if you're hungering for Craig and I talking about baseball, go back and listen to that episode. Be a premium subscriber. I thought you were going to say, we'll just do it now. But apparently, I see. We can't recreate the whole experience. But I think you have agreed that before we get to audience Q &A, I can give us all another update.
1:53Yeah, so hold until then. And if you're checking your phone along the way and something happens, cheer on the inside. You can keep that to yourself and save it for the Q &A. All right, Craig, how many times have we done a live show here at Austin? Oh, I would say at least twice. More than, yeah, more than twice. Oh, okay. 11 times we have done a live show here in Austin. And that's not counting three-page challenges. We're doing another live three-page challenge tomorrow, so please come to that if you'd like to. And if you want to read the scripts for the three-page challenge, They're already up on the front page of JohnAugust.com, so you can read along and see how well-formatted they are on the page.
2:33So often we come here, and it's just fun. It's not working. Always a great time. This year we actually have an agenda. Craig, that agenda matches up to the cards that are in your seat. I like that you're acknowledging that I don't know what the agenda is. Craig, we've got to sell some books. Oh! All right. So after 14 years of the Screenplay Fans podcast, we now have a book coming out December 2nd. So you might think like, oh, December 2nd, on December 2nd, I will buy that book. No. We need you to buy that book right now. Oh, you need to pre-order that book. Here's what pre-orders do. Pre-orders let bookstores know that like, oh, people really like this book.
3:13Maybe we should stock this book. It lets libraries know like, oh, hey, maybe we should buy a copy for a readership. It maybe puts us on a New York Times bestseller list, which would not be bad. Would not be bad. Now, Craig, I don't know if you got this email, but from our editor, Matthew, who's fantastic. He said, you know, we're a month out, and he said, the numbers look good. Oh, that's horrible. Yes, because we're screenwriters. We know that good is bad. Good is not fantastic. No. Good is like, are they okay? There's only two things, amazing and horrible. And there are like a thousand words for horrible.
3:48Yeah. And one of them is good. Good. It's funny that way. Yeah. The English language is both vast and limited, So I'm looking out over here. We have 400 people in this room. A show of hands, who in this room has currently pre-ordered the Scribd Notes book? Oh, that's a lot of hands, but I also see a lot of opportunities. These were all of the people that pre-ordered the book. More than that. Oh, okay, good. But yes, if everyone in this room ordered the book tonight, we have a real shot at getting on those lists that we want to be on. Because how cool would it be to have a screenwriting book be on the New York Times best-order list?
4:23that would be that would be kind of cool so it's scriptnotesbook.com that's where you see all the places where you can buy it you can of course support your local bookstore you can buy it through one of the online services if you want a signed copy Craig and I signed like 500 copies of the book it was pretty screwed up because we thought we were going to sell like 500 copies of the book so you guys got to really step up yeah you got to buy all of them but please tonight if you would pre-order the book it really does make a big difference ordering it now versus December 2nd thank you very much this man is a hero All right, I've got another here.
4:54Let me give one more. All right, we've got three. All right, I'm going to ask again at the end of the show how many people in this room have ordered that book tonight. I may be able to afford the flight back to L.A. That's the hope. This is pretty great. He bought a one-way ticket, so this may be the thing that gets Craig home. I commit. You do commit. I commit. We have an amazing show tonight. We have a conversation about relationships and really not just what our heroes want, but what our heroes want of the other characters. and that two-sided relationship. We're also going to talk about career transitions, which feels really right for this audience because I see a lot of people in this room who may be transitioning from one career into a writing career.
5:31We have a guest who's done exactly that and we're going to talk about what that process is like, what that jumping off the cliff kind of feels like. And I'm so excited to get into all this. It's going to be great. And then there's also some other fun stuff that we're going to do. We're going to have another game in here. This next one is really keyed into who our superfans are. So if you're a superfan of Script Notes, This is the next one that's going to be for you. I am a super fan of our first guest. Do you want to introduce her? Yes. Our first guest is a screenwriter whose credits include Moana, Nimona, Ralph Breaks the Internet, and the Academy-nominated short film with the best title of any Academy-nominated short film.
6:08I love singing. Or any Academy-nominated film of all time, My Year of Dicks. Yes. And so, of course, she's a native of Austin, Texas. and a five-time Script Notes guest. We really should be getting these folks a nice smoking jacket. Welcome Pam Ribbon. Pam Ribbon! Oh, my God. Oh, good luck. Yeah, where is my smoking jacket? We need to get you one. Aline has, like, the gold, like, diamond one. But you've been on the show a lot, and you've also been just a great guest again and again. Thank you. I pre-ordered Script Notes from Skylight Books October 11th. Yay! Thank you very much, Pamela Ribbon.
6:49So we have, in addition to the podcast, we have a newsletter called Interesting. So it's interesting, but the second N is an N because Aline makes fun that I can't say interesting with a T. So it's called Interesting. We have a newsletter, and Chris, our editor, came up this week with a post of his own that I thought was terrific. It's talking about relationships between two characters and how sort of a matrix on how much they are aligned and sort of the affection between the two of them. It was a great way to think about relationships. But I want to pose to the three of us, let's talk about relationships in our scripts and relationships between characters because we so often focus on what a character wants, but we don't focus on what characters want from other people and how that misalignment is really a source of conflict in our stories.
7:34Who wants to field it first? Well, I'll say something that's true. I hear in my head, Craig, I don't know when, I'm sure it was a podcast, but not at my face, this feels weird, you giving me this advice, but you said all movies are about the human experience and the relationships. That is in my head whenever I start any story. Well, I got that from Lindsay Duran. Okay. So really it's Lindsay Duran in your head. And she got it from Sidney Pollack. Okay. So Sidney Pollack is in all of our heads now. And he used to say when they were working on a screenplay that somebody else was writing, one of the questions he would ask is, what is the central relationship of this story?
8:11which in and of itself requires us to focus in on which one matters the most. But then I guess the question is, when you think about that relationship, how do you, I know this is sort of the way I think about it, do you construct characters and then put them in a relationship? Or do you construct a relationship and out of that figure out character? Well, it depends on if your protagonist is already well-defined. then you want to find who's going to drive that character crazy. But if you know that it's a world then planes, trains and automobiles it. How can these people have to be forced together and push each other's buttons?
8:53So I always try to figure it out mostly from the point of view which is kind of when you know what your theme is then everybody is sort of orbiting around this concept of whether these two are going to make it. When you think about relationships so often you think about romantic relationships like that's the default thing but like all any two characters have a relationship and so they could be work friends like Craig and I have a complicated relationship a good relationship but complicated it's a rom-com it's simple for me and what I think is crucial is that they may not be aligned and so one person may have one perception of a relationship that's different than the other person's and so it's not just about looking at a relationship from what is this relationship it's like what does this character think the relationship is and what does the other character think this relationship is and what changes over the course of the story and how do each of them affect change upon that relationship.
9:45I want to talk about Nimona for a second because in Nimona you have the central guy and the girl who's not really a girl and their relationship is complicated and evolves and I'm sure evolved a lot over the evolution of the script and the story. Well, you know, Nimona is a very strong character. Moana had Maui, I'll just say. You're trying to balance whose film is this for that central relationship. And yeah, you have someone who's questioning everything up against someone who never questioned anything before and thinks this is the only way it is. This is how I grew up. My life is because of this system.
10:21And now I'm starting to see that it's not, none of it's real. And now I've got the worst person, Nimona, with me to go through this. And then you make that relationship test whether or not it's even real. You know, this was a movie about, you know, Nimona says, like, everything is broken. The whole system is broken. What if you just look past what you have been told not to see? Well, and in that, you start to see how, okay, we all understand that when a hero is facing off against a villain, they're struggling over power. James Bond versus, you know, Blofeld. They're fighting over who is or is not going to destroy the world.
10:59But in all relationships, it seems, it's worthy to pay attention to the power because one person almost always has more power in the relationship than the other. And the question is, which one? Why? And then, how do I flip it? Because it's usually the case that just as characters change over the course of a movie, the relationship needs to change over the course of the movie. You mentioned planes, trains, and automobiles. Steve Martin has all the power. all of it until suddenly he doesn't. And that's what makes that movie beautiful. Talk a little bit, if you could, about how you think about who has the upper hand and how that might help you as you're wondering, I know what has to happen plot-wise, but what is this scene actually going to be?
11:45Oh, that's such a good question. Well, I think it's someone very stubborn about their point of view and they're going to have to change. And so you throw someone at them that is an undeniable force of change. right so they're just coming right at your heart and usually that's who we put like the sweet one as right the kind one so that you're rooting for this change yeah whether or not they work out oh that's why bing bong dies right you want the thing coming at you uh yes sorry yeah sorry the movie's out there scores three two i'm not gonna tell you who's up i'm just kidding i'm just kidding i don't know i've talked to you the whole time right at his heart.
12:24Yeah. Yeah, so you want someone who's going to mess up that status quo of that relationship. This is a demonstration of what power is in a relationship, what you just did. We're talking about power in a relationship, like who is doing the thing to the other person, but I want to direct us back to what does the character want from the other person? So you see people talking about love languages, like what is it that a person is seeking from the other character, and are they getting it? Are they getting it in the way that they need to get it? And how do they communicate what it is that they actually want?
12:55Does the character need to be seen? Does the character need to feel validated? Does the characters need a big hug? And so you look at Wreck-It Ralph, or you look at any of these dyad characters, they need different things. They have a hard time learning the language to talk to the other character. And that's actually some of the journey of the script. And if they knew it from on page 35, there wouldn't be a movie. The problem would be solved. So it's not just that they're trying to change their character. They're trying to kind of understand the other character and get the other character to see them as they see themselves.
13:26Well, they also need that other character to be a true mirror. Right. And that's the construction. That's like the, well done. That felt better than it should have. Well, there's that Wizard of Oz theory that all of the characters are just fragments of Dorothy's personality. and there is one method is that you have a strong central character and the relationship that that character has with another one and really all the relationships that that character has will be in service of them changing. All of those people through the relationship and you letting them down, making them happy, you change.
14:06The other model is that the relationship is the story. Romantic comedies, the relationship is the story. They will tend to lean it towards one person who just needed to learn, you know, but really it's the relationship. And I have to say, I think in animation, they do a really good job of that, better than I think live action. Well, we also, we come at it so open-hearted. So it allows for that love story to unflit. Like, I just keep thinking of the word shipping, which we now have for like, because you're rooting for this character or these characters to just survive everything. Just a side note, I learned my kid is 12, was like, hey, I just learned that shipping is about a relationship.
14:49I said, what do you think? She said, I thought it meant that you love someone so much that you go on the Titanic. And I was like, that is what it means. And I was like, you mean that you'd let someone be on the door? And she was like, yeah. Oh. My God. I thought that door kind of love. That floating door kind of love. But did he need to? I mean, he could have gotten on the door. I just... I just, well... But he... But he should leave us the ship. Oh, I thought that it meant, like, I love you so much, I will do one of those horrible cruises with you. But I want to circle back to this question about animation, because I do feel like, you know, Nimona, Moana, like, these relationships are really well done in animation, and I wonder if it's partly just the process.
15:31The process of, like, you're going through iteration after iteration, you're really seeing what's working there, and you can sort of narrow down and drill into it, versus as we shoot live action, well, we shot that scene, we're done, we're not going to go back and reshoot that scene again, that is an advantage. There were many Mauis. Because you could take over the film pretty easily. And then you also have all the myths. And which Maui do you want? Is it the Maui who in the end lifts up all the islands and discovers Polynesia? Or is he a broken demigod? Like one of the early versions, she was like this big Maui nerd.
16:01And she was so excited that she had met Maui. And he was just this defeated monster in a cave who didn't want to be talked to. And that's a good idea. but it probably didn't serve the rest of the movie and so the animation has the luxury of exploring the bad ideas and hopefully getting back on the right path. It gave him the movie because she was just urging him to come out and come out and come out and there is a line in Moana where I'm like that's the old version because she says maybe we were all here for you to realize you're Maui, right? She handed him the movie for a second and I don't know, you want it to always I think you always want Moana to win so that when she loses it is because she learned something from Maui.
16:42The relationship reinforces who she is. It is far less interesting to watch somebody learn something on their own. And it's really less interesting to watch somebody learn something easily. And having somebody else point out that you're either, you think you learned the lesson and you didn't, or you haven't learned anything at all is helpful. And I do think about John Candy confronting Steve Martin, where you understand that Steve Martin, yeah, Thanksgiving is about family. Okay, sure. But that relationship made me care about the statement, Thanksgiving is about family. And it would not have worked had you not, A, been invested in that relationship and B, also being even.
17:30So Steve Martin gets angry at John Candy reasonably. He's infuriating. He has to be. He has to be. all of that comes out of relationship as opposed to just characters next to each other. We also see ourselves in both of them. Yes, yes, yes. So that's why you want them to come together and heal the both terrible sides inside of you that they are at their worst at in a movie like that. And I have definitely done this with food. I flicked it right off myself, John Candy style. I would say our feature bias is probably coming through here because we're talking about feature films that have a clear arc, they have a beginning and an end and things go through.
18:04but I want to stress that the importance of relationships is obviously crucial to series television as well. You think about all of the individual relationships in The Office and the differences between them in Brooklyn Nine-Nine and so how specific that is. And obviously our great one-hour dramatic television, how important those are. And so Kate and Jack, but also all the other survivors on Lost, you're tracking where are these characters with each other at all times and what do they need from each other where are they trying to get from each other so it's so tempting to think about characters individual goals but there's goals within each relationship as well Craig when you know you have to kill off a character like Bing Bong when you know you're having to take some character that has been established so loved, so perfect that it's the moment they must die this is for both of you but do you feel bad?
19:00yeah of course because it's about the relationship. And that particular scene, I think you're talking about what I think you're talking about, right? Are you talking about? Chernobyl, yeah. You're talking about Chernobyl. Chernobyl. You're talking about the fourth diver in Chernobyl. I just think it was one that, you know, it made the trades. That's a big death. It's a big death. And it was, I remember when Mark Milad, who directed that episode so beautifully, we were sitting there without anyone. It was just the two of us in that room. And we were looking around like, where, where, where? And really what it came down to is, I think he needs to be here because she's going to come in here and they need to look at each other the entire time.
19:46They need to be this far apart. They need to be not so far apart that they're too far apart, but not so close together that they're too close together. Just the right amount of far apart because it is entirely about what it means to be connected to somebody in a relationship and be pulled away from them as we often are with our with everybody in our lives they have moments of ebb and flow you feel yourself drifting away from somebody but it's a rubber band it's not something that broke and you then come back in that moment all of it was focused through relationship. All of it, eyes, the whole thing.
20:23Someone mentioned past lives today. Oh, wow, yeah. That's it, right? You have a relationship that's been established and then a relationship that is mostly in the imagination and potential. And then you're sometimes rooting for it to stay there. Yeah. Yeah, exactly. Well, let's wrap this up by talking about technique. What are we doing on the page to communicate where people are at in the relationship? And so Let's think about how do we get insight into what the characters are thinking. Obviously they can say things, but more importantly we as an audience need to get a sense of each individual character what they really want.
20:59How do we find moments with each character separately so we can read what that is? Or that we can, as an audience, understand a thing that they're saying the other character doesn't understand it the same way. That's subtle, but it's so important. When you do that right in a scene, it really transforms what's happening there. You're like, oh, well, that's the actors, that's the performance, their chemistry. No, if it's not on the page, it's not going to make sense. You have to be able to read it and get like, okay, I get why this is heartbreaking. So in Big Fish, I understand the dynamic between Will and Edward because I see each of their points of view, and I'm rooting for both of them.
21:35I'm rooting for the relationship all together to be healed, and yet I know how hard it's going to be because I understand how stubborn each one of them is. yes when you're writing a scene especially between two people which is the my favorite and it's where you can focus it all down to relationship every single thing somebody says should have an impact on the other person even if that impact is to make them think oh we agree which is encouraging to me i didn't realize we agreed as much as we do That means they changed. And then mess it up. And then mess it up. And surprise and go back and forth.
22:13But every single thing that is said needs to have an impact. In our lives, we have conversations all the time where one person is saying the following and another person is sort of listening along going, oh, that's interesting, that's interesting. Well, here's something, da-da-da. And the other person, oh, that's interesting. No one wants to watch that. No. No one. That's for podcasts. That's for podcasts. that is what a podcast is I feel hurt you did the thing everything think about all of it, never give yourself a break there but all of it is an opportunity then therefore to make a conversation about the relationship and then think about every scene where were these two people in the beginning how are they on the way out and animation again, because it's so expensive every single moment has to be thought like that A million dollars a page.
23:04That's what they said to me. They're like, was this page good? I'll go work on that page. I can do some more. This is my improv background, but I always think, find the game. And do they play your game? That's when rom-coms take off. You know, and sometimes, like, my favorite, bring it on, it's like toothpaste scene, not a line, not a line, but they're brushing and spitting, and they're looking at each other, and they're teasing each other, they're testing each other, and they're playing a game, and by the end of it, you're like, I want this. I want this to keep happening. That's great. It's a great example.
23:37All right. It is time for our second guest. Would you like to introduce our second guest? Yes, I would love to. Our next guest is a showrunner, educator, father, and PhD, so screw us, whose credits include Queen Sugar, The District, The Blacklist, and Bel Air. Please welcome Anthony Sparks. Anthony Sparks! Welcome! Was anybody in the pitch contest last year? Perhaps. Yeah. These three. Yes, we were. The band is back together. We're back. We're back and ready to ruin your lives again. Stephanie Sparks, in the little bio intro, we talked about your PhD and all these amazing things. But of course, I buried a report lead.
24:20You were also in Stomp. Exactly. You were an actor, a Broadway actor on Stomp. Yes, yes, yes. And that is where you were starting to do your work, getting into writing. Yes. Are you literally backstage writing the scenes? Tell me about that. I am. I actually sometimes call Stomp my first writing job. All right. Because I was playing basically the, in sort of classic nomenclature of theater, I was the wise fool in the show. So when everybody else would ding, I would dong, right? And the show is written but improv'd at the same time in pockets. And I had a lot of improv. My job was to connect with the audience.
24:57the directors were crazy enough to rely on me to change my show every night i must have done a thousand stomp shows i never did the same show twice i just had to hit the punch lines which means i failed a lot on stage in front of hundreds of people but i would also hit and so that's why But I started thinking, what is my next act? And I had always sort of privately written, written in high school and things like that. And I decided that I was going to be a writer next as a practical answer to some things and a creative answer to some things that I was thinking about. And I literally started teaching myself how to write TV.
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25:44I'm sad to say I missed a few or was late to a few entrances because I was engrossed in my script backstage. and that was my sign that oh, maybe maybe it's time to leave you know, time is always working on scripts backstage, it's not and when you said like okay, I taught myself how to write TV to a degree how? because I'm sure a lot of people are like well, this is the early aughts and late 90s and there are screenwriting books but TV writing books and books about the TV business, but not as many as there are now. And so I was able to get my hands on a couple of books and I read them, you know.
26:32And I started just dissecting TV. I started watching it. At the time I thought I was going to be a comedy writer because I had written this satiric play that was getting some attention in New York City that I would put up on my days off from Stomp. I was young and had a lot of energy and was glad to say that I used it. So just sort of the fact that you had to come at it from a structural standpoint. I knew dialogue, I thought, from theater and plays. And I knew the feeling of structure, but I didn't know structure, you know, to the extent that you go into a writer's room and you're able to, you know, actually contribute to story advancing.
27:14And I would say that's a process is probably never a team for all of us. Sure, sure. But I mean, I suspect that it wasn't an accident that you were the person the director was relying on on stage to change things. I'm sure there were quite a few people on that stage that the director would be like, never, ever. You do the bang that lid there then. And you had a sense of it already. It's just that you needed then to kind of figure out how do I get this instinct? Yes. from instinct level to craft. It's a perfect term. Absolutely. And I can't say that that process was complete because is it ever, right?
27:55Because otherwise the same person who won an Oscar last year would win this year, right? Because they just repeat it. But that's not, there is an X factor to writing. But in terms of like fundamentally sort of understanding story, that process, so I was able to write to the point where I was able to get into fellowships. I was in New York. and at that time there was no TV writer business in New York. There is somewhat now. And I was applying to the Warner Brothers Fellowship, a writer's program. I was applying to the Disney Fellowship from New York, getting close but no cigar in some cases until finally I got one.
28:32Let's pause there for a second because I suspect a lot of people here have gotten close but no cigar. I'm sure that's a feeling you've all had and it's a bad feeling because you don't know if maybe there will ever be a cigar. Absolutely. What keeps you going in the hopes of a cigar? Wow. That's a deep question. Yeah, man. What keeps you going? You know, I think there are some people who will go for those fellowships because they're really hard to win. It's like 1 ,000, 2 ,000, 2 ,500. It feels like a crapshoot, and on some level, it is. I know plenty of writers who never got those fellowships who are king and queens of the world in TV and film.
29:12but I also have met a lot of people who applied once, didn't get it and was like, ah, you can't win anything it's like, it was one you wrote one script maybe you think it was great maybe it actually was but a person read it after they had a bad tuna sandwich and took it out on your script it happens but if you're a writer, writers write and you can't stop after one script you just cannot even you just can't writers write so you keep putting the coins in the machine and for me I applied once to Warner Brothers I just got married I married really young and I just got married and I applied and I didn't get in but for whatever reason they were having this one day workshop on a Sunday in Burbank where they were like going to talk about what we're really looking for.
30:07You know, I don't know if that particular batch of scripts that year was really bad or whatever, but they were doing this outreach. And I said to my wife, you want to go on a working vacation to LA so I can go to this workshop on this talk in Burbank. And so we did. We literally turned into a working vacation. We flew out here and I went and sat in the audience and took a bunch of notes. And there was hundreds of people there, asked some questions. And I went back and I took that back and I wrote a new script and I got it in the next year. And there are hundreds of people here who are going to be asking questions.
30:42Anthony, one thing that really impressed me about talking with you is that you worked really hard. You get knocked down, you pick yourself up, that's fantastic. But I think you also constructed a life that if your writing career never happened, you still had a lot of very meaningful things you were doing. So can you talk to us about the decisions? I know you got staffed on a show, but then you also got into a PhD program and you're balancing those two things. Exactly. And so now you're a doctor. So talk to us about that decision and what you're thinking as you're going through all this. My bio to some degree on a good day looks like I had this master plan for my life.
31:18And indeed I did think a lot about, my wife and I called it composing your life. It was something that when we first came out here to LA we went to go hear Maya Angelou speak and she spoke that. And I don't know, for some reason we were very impacted by that phrase, compose your life, which means just try to be intentional, try to put some things together. But I am mostly a product of just being hard-headed. I should have quit my PhD program like five times. So you're not a good doctor.
31:59as several as a few professors was like you know you can leave you know i was like no i'm pearly mays boy we don't quit you know um i am i'm i'm a hard-headed south side of chicago by the way a mississippi kid because those things don't normally go together There's only 24 hours in a day. You know, the day that I almost dropped my baby daughter because I was so tired was a moment where I was like, I'm quitting. Like, I'm doing too much. I'm exhausted. This child is three months old. I almost just dropped her on a concrete ground, you know. They bounce. They're fine. Yeah. Yeah. It only takes five seconds.
32:41She did call. She did call.
32:46Although there is a text chain today about these migraines that she's having. Will stress, almost, but did not drop his daughter. Right, I did not drop her. So, what was the question? Well, so I started finding balance. It's getting back to finding balance. So there's a moment where you're like, okay, I'm trying to do too much, but I also, I love that Ian choosing to do this PhD program and finishing this PhD program, you are giving yourself many opportunities. You're giving yourself many opportunities just to see it on many different things. All your eggs are on in this one basket and your identity is this because your identity is as a professor you're teaching but you're also a showrunner and you're a father and a writer who does his own things as well.
33:28You are composing your life like Maya Angelou suggested you do. The only thing I knew to do was to try it. I mean, I'm the son of a mom who had a sixth grade education and so it was very hard for me when USC offered me funding for five years to the total of about$300 ,000, like the little kid from the south side of Chicago, I'm like, I got to try and make this work. Like win one for the ancestors, like seriously. And so when my show unexpectedly got canceled, so the thing that happened was I got staffed, I got the fellowship, I said no to the fellowship because I'm going to go right. My show got canceled.
34:09And I was like, does health insurance come with that? You know, so there was a practical side to it. And so I said, well, I'm going to start because I noticed my first year on the show that I was on as a staff writer, I noticed I was in my office a lot reading. And I was like, I could be reading a book and getting credit for this. And so I didn't know that that's not how all shows operate. And I said, so I went with the, I have been the beneficiary or what results from saying yes to the door that happens to be open at that time. I think that's a wonderful thing. And that's certainly something that I think people who don't come from privilege feel.
34:48The open door is not tempting. The open door is necessary because the doors are usually closed. and what I love about your story is you took away some of the innate fear that okay I finally got I made it I made it I broke in people are always asking us how do you break in the answer is there is no breaking in you get broken and so you think you got broken in and then show's cancelled lol right but you had something else to do you were not you did not go aha I made it I've arrived the end because it is not a smooth path. And I do think that it makes you a better writer when you're not writing scared.
35:33Yes, yes. And just sort of, I mean, and it was a scary time. This happened because, you know, I said earlier today, I was like, I got staffed and I was like, hey, let's have a baby. And we did. Yeah. And then the show was canceled. Yeah. and you can't take her back. But also, you weren't stopping your decision to have a family based on like, well, if I get writing success, then it will start the rest of my life. You started your life and I think that's a crucial lesson to learn as well because I think sometimes we fall into, we write heroes, we write protagonists and we assume they have to go through this arc and do all this stuff and have a plan for how it's all going to be and if you're not exactly on that plan, then it's a disaster.
36:20That's not real life. and so what I like is that you are just like, no, I'm starting now. I'm starting at things that are important to me now. You got married young, you started having a family young and that's awesome. As we wrap up though, I want to talk about teaching because Craig and I, people who listen to the show, sometimes have opinions about university screenwriting programs which can be challenging. As you should. I'm really curious, what do you get out of it? What as a professor do you take from teaching? Because you don't have to, but you do it because you want to. I do it because I want to, it certainly isn't the money.
36:49I am a product of a serious succession of teachers who just kept giving me shots, creating opportunities for me, believing that I was worthy of them. And so it did kind of get into my bones that that is what you do. You educate yourself, you learn, you earn, and then you return, as Denzel Washington once said. and so that is part of me genuinely that's sort of the Pollyanna part of me the other part of me is that is a very practical way for me not so much with money but just in terms of the I'm always engaged in story I'm always I don't walk into rooms desperate because I've built out these other areas of my life without compromising my commitment to what it is that we all get to do it also is practice for me as a showrunner when I'm not running a show.
37:49I have to break down story and teach it to people who are in a very different place than I am. I am a better, better, much better writer since I started teaching. Amen. And listen, if everybody had your resume and your validity and your experience, then I would say everyone rush out to go to school. But there are other ways to get me. We do this. and there are other ways of course to do that but one thing I love about what you're saying is I feel like doing this over the course of all these years made us better because we have to think about it there's no way many of us make our bones writers write a lot by instinct and you can be a great writer who writes by instinct but I think at some point when you're writing and it's your profession like no one's waiting for you to feel the muse coming and that's where craft kicks in to get you from those moments of inspiration to inspiration which lifts something to a new level but in the meantime it's grinding it out it's craft it's thinking about absolutely i mean i've listened to your podcast and i mean i'm trying i'm trying to be i'm ear hustling i'm trying to be cool and not like be seen taking notes but i'm definitely taking notes
39:10everybody up here is you know is worthy of being up here for lots of different things and being a writer is a little bit of a lifetime student thing like even when you do it well and you've had these accolades hopefully you're always at the end of the day staring at that blank page going fade in oh shit yep Anthony thank you very much for joining us here thank you so much Great. Now it is time for one of our favorite but also potentially terrifying segments where we invite the audience up to ask some questions of us and our panelists. Hello. What is your name and what is your question? My name is Jason.
39:48You can all answer this. What is the first thing you do when you feel stuck in a script? What is the first thing we do when we get stuck in a script? Pamela, what's the first thing you do when you get stuck in a script? Well, I complain. I complain about it. I complain about it. I walk around the house with this face. Everyone thinks I'm mad at them. I'm like, I'm thinking. I have my thinking face. And then you try to figure out why you're so irritated because you think, I know how to do this. Why don't I know how to do this right now? And what that is is why you're stuck. That's the problem you're solving.
40:24So then you go talk to someone else about your problem, and then they tell you their problem, and then you help them with their problem, and then they help you with your problem. I mean, yeah, getting an outside perspective, You know, when we're writing, we're making a thousand different decisions that we hope will somehow add up to something that is compelling and believable. So sometimes the outside perspective. If I can't get that, I will sometimes step back and simply ask myself, what is the logical thing that would happen here? And try to, because I can get overly whatever in my head. And so break it, like what is the simple thing?
40:59Not what is the interesting thing. That comes after. What's the logical thing that this character would do or feel or say in this moment to at least make the dots connect? And then I can go back and try and find a way to make it. I sometimes will say when I'm leaving a room, like, let's do the boring expected version, get it up on the board. This will in no way be what's in the script. But let's at least make it make sense. And then we can go back and make it interesting. That's great. Both of you. Great advice. I sometimes feel myself trying to solve the problem. Then I stop myself because you're not going to solve it well if you're trying to solve it because you're thinking about it like a problem.
41:40So then I just go, okay, I'm going to forget about the problem. Let me just think about my characters. Let me just put them in different scenes. Let me play around in my head. Let me take a long shower. Let me think about this. And let me also, and I've gotten much better about this, look at this as good news. It's actually good news. We tend to think that if we're stuck, we're dying, we're not. It just means we don't see it yet. you will. And you will because you know you don't have it. That's how you know you will see it because you'll know it when you know it. It's coming. You just gotta let it come.
42:08It's the puzzle lover in you. Although I try to remind myself this is just a puzzle I haven't solved and if this was a crossword puzzle I wouldn't be this mad. Exactly. For me, I make a deck of cards called Rider Emergency Pack which is sort of for this purpose. So it's a thing that like the little things I do when I sort of get jammed up in a thing. So you can find it in stores or Amazon or wherever. But the philosophy behind it is sometimes you just really need to change your focus. And so a card will be magnified. What if you were to zoom in super, super tight on this thing or on this character or zoom all the way out?
42:39What if you were to change genres? Imagine this is a spy thriller rather than this comedy that you're writing. What would be the solution to that kind of movie? And just getting yourself off this track that is jammed into this place and realizing there's a whole range of possibilities I'm just not considering, that tends to help. The other thing which is true for all of this is that when you have hit a problem, rarely is the problem right where you're at. The problem was a while back and you probably just need to lay some different tracks to get around this thing that's in front of you. You may be imagining a perfect solution to this problem that really does not exist.
43:14Really it's to create a different situation that doesn't end up in this place. Great question, thank you so much. Thank you. That was honestly a paradigm example of an actual question. It was a master class in asking a question. So no pressure now. What's your name and what's your question? Hi, I'm Imte. As an actor by training, I was taught that acting rests on a three-legged stool of imagination, relaxation, and concentration. Wow, great. So I was wondering if there is a similar kind of philosophy when it comes to writing. If so, what's the hardest leg for each of you and how have you worked to develop that?
43:51So remind us of the three things that you were taught. So imagination. imagination, relaxation, concentration well those are really great principles I haven't articulated something like that of what those things are but those are all crucial things as we're sort of putting ourselves in a place and sort of watching what happens which to me is what writing largely is to capture the true moment I get that relaxation part is so important because I was like writers have an 18 leg stool and then we were like I think I have too many legs but that key I think is the relaxation to let the moment come and to breathe with your script and to just be like okay honesty is somewhere in there and are you being honest to the moment are you being honest to these characters are you trying to force a thing that's not supposed to be there and so relaxation is probably part of that but really is the scene true is the moment true or is it fake does it feel fake within the context of this script that's a crucial thing for me too because sometimes we're talking about problem solutions, there's a fake solution, there's a thing which is just not honest to the thing, and you're always going to hate it because you know you lied to get there.
45:03Yeah, I wish I had good stool legs for you. I think ultimately there is, in acting, those are three great things to consider. None of them will help you if you're not a good actor, and all of them will help you if you're a good actor. there is something that is instinctive to artists and craftspeople and so sometimes the answer is to say okay, I'm not good at everything as a writer what am I good at? what is that telling me right now? let me listen to that because that's what I'm good at follow that the rest is absolute mystery to me I gotta be honest I don't know where I go I don't know how I do it when I read things that I've written in the past I'm terrified because I don't know who wrote that and I don't know how to do it again.
45:51Yep, don't remember it. I was gone. I'll read something like, oh, that sounds like me, but I have no recollections. I don't know who these characters are. Yeah, and that's terrifying, actually. So there you go. It's like an upside-down stool with one leg. Think of it that way. That's what it's like. That's writing. That's crazy. Yeah, yeah. Thank you so much for your question. Yeah. Good question. Hello. What's your name and what's your question? My name is Joe. podcasting and screenwriting are clearly two different mediums what is something you have learned about yourself either as a podcast host or a guest that is something you would not have learned during the creative process oh and that kind of ties into what we were saying earlier about you know educating is education well I know that I have had to think a little bit more clearly about some of the things that I do believe philosophically so it's different than you know what is an inspiration in a moment when you sit back and you go, okay, there's artsy-fartsy Craig, but then there's also outline Craig, who's got a job to do and understands it needs to fit within a certain amount of time.
46:55It needs to achieve certain things plot-wise. There has to be surprises and all these nuts and bolts things. I think doing this and being forced to talk about those things helps me codify and make some of those a little bit clearer in my own head. It's like forced organization. And I would say, I'm always ribbed at being like, segue man I'm always like moving on to the next thing but what that really is is recognition of being very present in the moment but also always knowing where you're headed and where you need to get to next and that's also writing that's also what a scene needs to do is like you need to set a sense like we are fully in this moment and yet we're going to the next thing and so just that way a scene can just die and just like people are just sitting there and nothing's happening you don't feel any momentum you gotta keep the momentum there while still letting it be present for the characters who are in that scene Yeah, that makes sense.
47:46Great question. Thank you so much. Thank you.
47:51Hi there. Big fan. Sorry, I'll be a little bit farther. My name is Silas. You guys did a podcast episode relatively recently. I don't know how well in advance you record these, about short films. I'm a sci-fi writer. I'm a sci-fi fantasy writer, genre writer. And I sometimes have a really hard time balancing the line between being super obnoxious and explaining everything way too heavily. You know, the whole Star Wars scroll thing, whatever. and people asking me, why are they doing that? What is happening? And that's a huge problem to have in short films where everything is super compact, needs to be super tight.
48:24My question is, how do you balance that line between exposition and mystery? Sure. I'll turn that over to you guys because we all deal with this one. Everybody needs to know things. Also, you don't want them to know things. You want to spend a lot of time spending the things. What are some of the things, I think about an animation again, a million dollars a page. what are some of the tricks you use? Yeah, well, you know, the story in Frozen is there were all these backstories and all these minutes they had to get rid of and it changed into the line, was she born with it or was it a curse? You know, so I think, and that's an interesting question.
48:59It gets answered and now we know everything about why we're here. So trying to find a way to take all of that that you think they need to know, you think they need to know it, they don't. Like, they don't think that. they want to know what do I care about I don't care about the backstory until I know why they're not in love why do they hate each other then I can start to learn all the worlds and what your currency is and why it's a patriarchy or whatever it is that the sci-fi world wants you to know that stuff is interesting for you to know what your tone is but we don't need to know all of it to care about your characters Salas, thank you so much thank you Salas Thank you.
49:41Hello. Hello. Hello. My name is Brenna Kwan. My question is, what is your opinion on, let's say, sizzle reels or proof of concepts from, let's say, emerging filmmakers that's created out of AI? Do you consider that as a red flag or like? Hey, it's a good question. It's a good question. Girl. I think everybody in here is going to be my answer. But let's see what you say. So let's talk about sizzle reels in general. So sizzle reels, we're cutting together stuff from other movies that give a sense of what this thing feels like. For directors who are putting together a project, sometimes it's a really helpful way of showing what it is that you're trying to do and sort of do this thing.
50:22Where I get a little bit frustrated is when you have to do a sizzle reel for just a script that you're not trying to direct, just to get someone to read the script. That's really annoying. I really wish we could stop doing that because I think it's a waste of time because you're here to be a writer, not to be a sizzle reel maker. and so whether you're cutting it out of other films or using AI or whatever to do it I just don't think it's a good practice for us to be in so many strong opinions on use of AI and what things feel like okay well it's a person using that thing to do the job they would otherwise be doing to do I don't have problems if a visual effects artist is using some new tool that uses some of the stuff in there I just don't want it to replace their job and I do feel like using a scissor reel to do that kind of stuff it's just putting more of that slop out there in the world and I'm really frustrated about it.
51:08I think it's an indication maybe of lack of commitment or even, dare I say, laziness. Because remember, Sizzle Reel is already taking what other people have done and putting it together to go, it's kind of like what these people have worked really hard to do, which is already sort of a cheat code, which is fine. But then to say, and also I just asked the slop machine to barf out somebody with seven fingers to help me. It's indicative to me that maybe the heart isn't in it. I guess here's my concern. I see your thing and I feel like, this was done with AI, and then I'm going to read your script and it's like, did she really write it?
51:47I don't think it reflects well on you. Where does it stop? That's why I'm going to say no. I'm going to say no. What do you guys think? Big pro? Oh, Pam Ribbon loves AI? Is that the headline here? No. I was trying to get controversial. people listening. I am not nodding or excited. No, AI makes me feel scared. When I watch it, I get uncomfortable. You know, what is it called, Sora? My husband will be like, look at this. And I'm like, that's a cyborg. We must run. We must run away from it. And so I would worry that when you think this is going to explain how it feels, you have to worry about how it feels.
52:26Like when it's not real. You might not feel the way you want it to feel. And why are you, is it budgetary? What is the reason behind why one would do this? So I'm trying to recreate my pilot into a webcomic or a webtoon and to perhaps advertise for it. I was playing around with Sora, so that's where the question stemmed from. I can understand what the instinct is behind that, but I would say look for what webtoons are doing. The things you actually like that are webtoons that you enjoy. and also I'd say don't turn your script into a webtoon just because that's a thing you can do unless you really love that as a medium.
53:04Because I feel like so often you say like, oh I couldn't sell it as a movie but we're going to do it as a dramatic podcast. It's like, well do you actually love dramatic podcasts or are you just spitting your wheels because you want to do something? I hope that the robots don't listen to this later and come after us. There's that whole thing where you will be the one that they're like, well you live. Right. Thank you so much for your question. Thanks for coming out tonight. All right, let's do two more questions. So these next two, and then we'll be done for tonight. Two more. Hey, guys, I'm Jordan.
53:35My question's a little specific, but maybe we can make it a little more universal. But say you've got a great adult animated pilot that you're taking out, and you've gotten a little bit of feedback. You're leaning towards serialized, but everybody's telling you, well, we want episodic. Do you go and do you rejig it? And you could go either way with it, really, but you're leaning towards serialized. Do you go and adjust for the market, or did you write the thing that you want to write and just wait for it to be the right time for it? I think you know your answer, but let me make sure that the rest of the crowd understands this.
54:03So you have an opportunity, people like the thing you've written, you could make it serialized where you're supposed to watch all the episodes in order, or episodic where you can watch them in any order whatsoever. You're going to have a sense of what is more fun and interesting for you to write, do that. But if the buyer says, no, we really want it this other way and you had a chance to do it, do that. you have to both be steadfast and adaptable in this business you have to be true to what's important to you but also flexible to actually get things done and get things made we both know filmmakers who just they made a great film and they were so steadfast I'm not going to compromise a damn thing for my second film they're not making films anymore there is no second film and I believe that there will be another thing so I never like to think that whatever I'm working on now is it a little bit like don't put all your eggs in the wrong basket.
54:53Yeah, that's a really great thing to remember. I think the business will go on without any one individual. And that's really horrible to say. Even if Ryan Murphy were no longer making all his things, we would still have a television business. Economically, we would take a hit. We would take a hit, but yes. And so, you know, sometimes people have to remember that. You know, what can you do that feels like is not absolute betrayal to the center of what it is you're writing that you can collaborate on, you know? And also, why not try? Because then if it doesn't work, you can say, this is why I really wanted it this other way.
55:38And I can see why you asked me to do this, because the Simpsons or whatever, like, they're all, you know, they're all episodic. But BoJack worked for a reason. so once you try the way that they think they want or they need maybe they need it, that's the mandate so try for the job that you can get always Good luck Tim, we'll see you at a future AFF as it is Alright, bring us home Who are you and what is your question? My name is Emmett Farnsworth-Guzman Emmett Farnsworth-Guzman is a fantastic name Thank you, my parents gave it to me Did you invent television? Actually, that's my great-great-uncle.
56:16Is it really? It's Philo T. Farnsworth. That's actually your great-great-uncle? That's amazing. Yeah. What is happening? This man's great-uncle invented television. Yeah. Philo T. Farnsworth. Really? Philo T. Farnsworth. Why is he here? I know. Are you hiring? I feel seen right now. You feel seen. That's when we come back to relationships. Your love language is validations, feeling seen, feeling heard. Yeah. We're giving it to you right now. Well, I wasn't expecting that. Yeah. So, yeah, I wasn't expecting that.
56:50Really? You're shooketh. They really did. They really did. So the thing is, is I've listened to an inordinate amount of you guys over the past year, starting from the beginning. Incredible. You have very terse words for people selling books. So why do you decide to write this? Thank God someone finally asked a question. Yes, yes, yes. night. I can't believe none of these first words. It was an open goal. None of you took the shot. It's a great question. John, can you explain why we have a book? I would say our listenership kept saying like, hey, you should make a book or you should put a book of your transcripts out there.
57:30And so we literally did the math like, well, what if we just did a book of our transcripts? It was impossible. It was bigger than this entire room to do our transcripts. And so it was like, oh, well, what if we could do sort of a best of, like sort of the synthesized version? Because the thing that happens to me and Craig constantly is like, hey, so I have a question about blah, blah, blah, blah, blah. It's like, okay, we talked about this on episode, I don't know, like 346. And so you can send someone to say, oh, go back and listen to episode 346. But if I could just give you a book, this is what we've talked about.
58:00And so Natalie and Luke, who have the galley's here, you can track them down and look over their shoulders and see what's in the book. But the book is very specifically sort of synthesized versions of what things we talked about over the course of the podcast. and it's not like how to write a screenplay. There's like one chapter. Called How to Write a Screenplay. How to Write a Screenplay. Literally. Which is mostly about finding Nemo, really. But people love it. But the book consists of distilled versions of all the things we've talked about. So like stuff about relationships and stuff like that.
58:33But it's not like here are the plot points and here's all the Sid Field stuff. It's not that kind of book. It's a book about screenwriting and not a like how to write a screenplay. I'll give you, this is why I was very, I mean, John and his team, of course, did all the work. You guys know I suck. But what I think is great about it is, and I'm going to, I don't mind sounding like a jerk. We know what we're doing. This is our jobs. This is our careers, our lives. We have spent decades working in this business as professional writers. And we are still doing it to this day. You know, sometimes we have hits, sometimes we have losses, but we are still here.
59:08after breaking into the business in the mid-90s. We're still here. We must know something. And that is actually a perspective that generally doesn't exist in the 4 ,000 other books. They're written by people that don't. And I'll also say that the stuff we don't know, every other chapter is interviewed with one of our guests who's come on the show. So it is Christopher Nolan or Greta's coming in. We're talking to everybody, Aline and everybody else, about their experiences that are very specific and that are not our experiences. They're not just us. Yeah, because we don't have the hubris to say we actually know everything.
59:45We know a lot, but we actually have guests who know a ton of stuff that we don't know, which has been great, too. So it's honestly so people don't... But I'm glad you asked that. Yeah, I'm glad you asked that. Thank you for the question. And also, this is a time, a show of hands, who has pre-ordered the script notes book? Oh, my God. I had to be informed, you know? Thank you. Thank you for that so much. Thank you for the softball there. Thank you very much, Mr. Barnesworth. It's like he was sent by the publishing company. Oh, my God. That is our show for this week. So if you want to hear this as a podcast, you can subscribe to Script Notes, and you'll get this in the feed on Tuesday.
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1:01:03Yeah, so the Q &A will be the bonus segment. when you listen to it. So no one else has to hear those great questions there at the end. This was our 11th live show. Not a bad one. Not a bad one. Not a bad one. Really, really good. I'm loving it. You're a great crowd. Thank you. Thank you so much. Have a great night. What a great time. Thank you guys for coming out.
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John and Craig return to Texas for their 11th show at the Austin Film Festival. They welcome writer Pamela Ribon (Nimona, My Year of Dicks) and showrunner Anthony Sparks (Queen Sugar, Bel-Air) to look at what makes character relationships compelling, and how to build a writing career later in life.
We also answer lister questions on getting un-stuck in a script, how podcasting has made us better writers, the limits of exposition, using AI for sizzle reels, and where we get the cajones selling a screenwriting book after slagging-off screenwriting books for fourteen years.
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