In short
Script Notes’ 15th-anniversary “quinceañera” episode celebrating the show’s 2011 launch, revisiting early episode 1 advice, and answering listener questions about pitching rewrites, showing passage of time without title cards, and why TV/movies take so long to make. They also discuss 2011 film/TV context and share “One Cool Thing” picks.
Guests
No external guests. Hosts are John August and Craig Mazin. Meredith Stedman, Lauren Loesberg, Matthew Cilelli, and producer/assistant roles are mentioned, but they do not appear as separate guests.
Key claims
Pitch positively—acknowledge issues briefly, then sell a forward vision; listening to exec concerns prevents reinforcing dislikes. Time passage can be shown via changing environments, wardrobe/hair/makeup, recurring visual anchors, or subtitles if needed. Production time is driven by movie-scale schedules, prep, VFX, and post; “bigger” TV now often shoots like movies.
Notable examples
Big Fish (changing town set), Boogie Nights (titles/wardrobe/music), Game of Thrones (early yearly release model), Moneyball, and TV examples like Hacks.
Written by AI. May contain mistakes. Listen to the episode to check what was said.
Chapters
Tap a time to open that second in VOUnderstanding Quinceañera
0:46 to 1:54
Craig explains the cultural significance of a quinceañera celebration.
“Our quinceañera will also do what we've always done, which is answer listener questions.”
Origins of Script Notes Podcast
1:54 to 3:55
John and Craig reminisce about the beginnings of their podcast journey.
“Craig, this is the moment where I ask, so 2011, but do you remember how this all started?”
Early Recording Experiences
3:55 to 7:03
Hosts discuss their early recording experiences and technical challenges.
“I'm trying to think of other good points to talk about.”
Changes in Production Over Time
7:03 to 10:08
John and Craig reflect on the changes in their podcast production and team structure.
“You said within the first, I don't think it was maybe the first minute or two of the podcast.”
The Movie Landscape of 2011
10:08 to 14:01
The hosts discuss the significant films released in 2011.
“And it was confusing for people if people weren't finding it.”
The State of Movies and Streaming
14:01 to 17:18
Learn about the current trends in movie economics and audience behavior post-COVID.
“what they're really saying is we can't make as much money making movies in theaters as we can if we just make them and put them on streaming.”
Television Highlights of the Year
17:19 to 21:35
Explore the impact of notable TV shows that premiered during a pivotal year.
“and things that are interesting to screenwriters.”
Revisiting Script Notes: A 15-Year Reflection
21:36 to 25:58
Reflect on the evolution of advice given in screenwriting and pitching over the years.
“All right, we have a new question here, which just seems very relevant to this Kinita and Yara moment.”
The Complexity of TV and Movie Production
25:59 to 28:00
Understand the reasons behind the lengthy production timelines in film and television.
“Boogie Nights, I think Paul Thomas Anderson used both titles and wardrobe, hair, makeup, music to move us through the years, as I recall.”
The Time Investment in Movie Production
28:00 to 29:08
Learn about the extensive time required for movie production, including shooting and post-production.
“And that means it takes a lot of time because it takes time to prep a movie, it takes time to shoot a movie, and it takes time to post-production.”
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The Production Cycle of 'Hacks'
29:08 to 29:54
Discover how the creators of 'Hacks' continuously work on new seasons without breaks.
“except that rather than making 22 episodes per season, they're making 8 to 10 episodes per season.”
Challenges in Shooting Complex Scenes
29:54 to 31:38
Explore the difficulties of shooting shows with complex scenes compared to simpler productions.
“The reason that hacks can be yearly is because their show is much easier to shoot.”
Delays in Big Productions
31:38 to 32:46
Understand the reasons behind delays in big productions and how they manage shooting schedules.
“that ultimately creates these huge delays.”
The Evolution of Show Standards
32:46 to 34:06
Discuss the increasing standards in show production and the challenges of meeting audience expectations.
“I've been thinking a lot about Baldur's Gate and how to get back to the way Game of Thrones functioned.”
Nostalgia in Music Playlists
34:06 to 35:30
Hear about a nostalgic playlist that evokes memories of past experiences in drugstores.
“also applies to script notes because our standards have also just gotten higher.”
Craig's Literary Review Insight
35:30 to 37:54
Learn about a literary review of Chekhov’s early work and its significance in understanding his development as a writer.
“My One Cool Thing fits in very nicely with this nostalgia.”
Reflections on Early Writing
37:54 to 42:00
Explore personal reflections on early writing experiences and how they shape a writer's journey.
“It was a review in a magazine called Literary Review.”
Reflecting on Past Writing
42:00 to 43:14
Hosts discuss lost early writings and their evolution as writers.
“and I don't have the disks for those anymore.”
Transcript
Automatic transcript. May contain errors.0:01John August:Hello and welcome. My name is John August. My name is Craig Mazin. Today on the show, the year was 2011. It was the height of the Arab Spring and Occupy Wall Street. The Harry Potter franchise had just come to an end. LOL. While Fifty Shades of Grey had just been published. Oh my God. Into this roiling moment exactly 15 years ago, Craig. Wow. A new podcast about screenwriting and things that are interesting to screenwriters was launched. Craig, do you know the name of the podcast? I don't listen to podcasts, Sean. Was it Script Notes? It was Script Notes. Nailed it. Nailed it. That's the one podcast I know.
0:39John August:Today is our quinceañera. It's our 15th birthday. So to look back and celebrate 15 years of doing this show, here's a special episode. Our quinceañera will also do what we've always done, which is answer listener questions. And in our bonus segment for premium members, let's move our attention from the past to the future and anticipate where we'll be 15 years from now in 2041. Exciting. Exciting. What really gets me here is the stuff that you cited historically that's going on. Oh, there's more. There's more as we get into it. There's some good stuff. I think we should probably explain for our non-American listeners is what the hell a quinceañera is.
1:18John August:Craig, can you give us some sense of what a quinceañera is? A quinceañera is a celebration, I believe, typically of a young girl's 15th birthday. and I think of it notably as something that Latinas do. I think it's a traditional Mexican celebration, but it could be all of Central America. I don't think it's a South America thing and I don't think it's a Spanish thing. I think it's mostly like Mexican and Central American, but I could be wrong. I think of pretty dresses. I think of like fly-onsu dresses. Yeah, like big sort of Easter style dresses. And it's basically like it's a more frilly and fancy sweet 16.
1:53Yeah.
1:53John August:But it's 15. 15. Yeah, that's great. Craig, this is the moment where I ask, so 2011, but do you remember how this all started? Like, what is your memory of the beginning of Script Notes? I got a call from you. We were both making blogs. Yeah. And I talked to you. We had the same agent at the time. And I talked to you because I had like technical blog questions and you were very helpful. And then you called me and you said you were thinking about doing a podcast. Yeah. And you were thinking about combining forces and we could do a podcast together. And I was like, great. Except I didn't know what podcast was, which I think I withheld from that conversation.
2:37But what I did glean from you was that it would be talking and not writing. And I love the sound of that. Yeah.
2:47John August:So that is also my memory of things. And then over this last week, we were going through old files because we're trying to consolidate all the script notes files onto one server. So we actually have a source of truth for things. And I found a recording that predated script notes. And so this was you and I on a, I guess, a Skype call at that point talking through what this would be like. And so I want to play this recording for you. Oh, my God. What was there was one that you picked out? Yeah, it's a script notes. Right. Fine. Yeah, you know, it's okay. Notes on craft. Yeah. I mean, nothing is worse than, like, screenwriting 101.
3:23That's the worst title ever. But that's the right idea. Things about screenwriting are interesting to us. So it's like screenwriting 204. God, I'm the worst at this. I can't even title my movies. Screencraft? Pro writing. You could also be sort of, like, vaguely arty about it, like, 120 pages or something like that, you know. 12-point courier. Three-hole punch with John and Craig.
3:51John August:I would like to vote for script notes until we think of something better. I second that motion. All in favor, aye, aye. Aye, aye. I'm trying to think of other good points to talk about. Randomly, I had coffee with Heather Hatch today. Okay. Was at your seminar at the Guild. Oh, cool. What'd you think? I liked it. It was two hours that basically was saying the same thing. I mean, in different ways. I mean, some of it was practical tips about how to deal with bad notes. And so it was practical tips about how to deal with bad employers. But the big message of the whole thing was that in the end, the enemy is your own emotional pain.
4:28And that every time you put your emotional pain in the management thereof first, you are essentially paving the path toward your own firing. And you can feel emotional pain, and you will, but you just can't make that job number one. Yeah. Well, this feels like a podcast-y kind of conversation.
4:47John August:There you go. Happening on our podcast. Yeah. So let's hit stop. Okay. Garage band. Oh, my God. All right. So lift the needle off your vinyl imprinter. Let the tubes cool. So many crazy things about this. So this is... It's insane. June 11th, 2011 is this recording. Oh, my God. So a couple of things. Our mics sound terrible. We're recording in garage band. Yeah. A lot of what you hear in the background, that clicking sound, is my dog, Louie, walking around. Louie, rest in peace. Louie was a pug. He looked like a dog. He wasn't actually a dog. He was some sort of just mindless robot who was furry, who saw everybody as like salty robots that he could lick.
5:28John August:But he had some sense of what the show was. We didn't even have a name for the show yet. We didn't have a name for the show, but we sound the same. But that was 15 years ago. Yeah. I noticed I was doing the thing which you hated so much where you would say something and I would say, yeah. I would leave it there so I have gotten better about that I don't leave me hanging so much it was the best was when I would say something then there'd be like a long pause and then yeah and then you go and it was almost like I could just feel you like you idiot that was but that's us that's who we were we were the same maybe that's why people like this podcast I'm still struggling to figure out why I think maybe the reason is because we are unchanging We're very stable.
6:15That podcast zero, it's kind of our vibe.
6:18John August:It's kind of our vibe now. So Meredith, you went back and listened to episode one. Can you talk us through some of the things you learned going back to episode one that we might have forgotten? Also, I do think that recording belongs in the Smithsonian. Two men on mic discussing in 2011 the possibility of starting a podcast. Yeah. Iconic. Where else would they find that? I mean, there's only one million of those. You have to document that. Yeah. Okay, so a couple things I noticed from episode one. Firstly, Craig, you say your name normally in the intro. Yes. I don't know when I started doing it.
6:54I don't know why I started doing it, but it just happened one day. I don't know. And I'm sure when it happened, John thought, stop it. I think that's right. And John, you had a flub. You said within the first, I don't think it was maybe the first minute or two of the podcast. Oh, I mean, he did it. Did he do it? No, he didn't do the... He didn't do that. He just rolled with it. You said, we're going to be dig deeping into these subjects. Then you guys laughed and decided you would leave it in. All right. I love that. You discuss pitching, particularly going to a first meeting with the studio and laying out your take.
7:32You declare you won't be a very news following podcast, but you might cover some timely things from time to time. you don't have a one cool thing in the first episode and obviously no bonus segment. No, it took a while for that too. And you end with, we think we're going to do this fairly regularly.
7:52John August:In fact, we did. Every Tuesday for 15 years, we've done a podcast. Incredible. But it's also worth noting like how much has sort of changed over the years. So Stuart Friedle, who was both my assistant and the producer, but we didn't call him a producer yet at the start, was doing a lot of the work. But I was actually cutting all the episodes myself in GarageBand, which was kind of the best tool to do that in at the moment. We were recording remotely. And so we would have the same time calling on Skype. And so I would call Craig or Craig would call me through Skype. And we were each recording our slides locally, which we still basically do, except we do it on Zoom now.
8:27John August:Matthew Cilelli started writing our outros at a certain point. And then when I met him in person, I said, hey, do you think you could cut the show? He's like, yeah, I could cut the show. And he's been cutting the show ever since. God bless him. I mean, seriously. I just like, Script Notes is like a weird, it's like the La Brea tar pits. People just like wander in and then... They fall into it and they're there forever, forever. So we said that Stuart was eventually credited as the producer because he was really doing the producing work, which is posting the episodes, dealing with the incoming mail, all that stuff.
8:59John August:By the time that Drew was our producer, I asked him yesterday and he said like, 80 % of his job was Script Notes producer and only 20 % was my assistant, which is part of the reason why I was like, you know what, this doesn't make sense. And so we split off the job as script notes producer and now have Meredith as our first full-time script notes producer. And Drew is my full-time assistant. And it's a godsend, a good change. And we have Lauren helping out as well because one of the other big changes is that we started recently shooting video for a lot of our stuff. And while we don't release full video episodes at this point, we are using that video for social media, for other things.
9:31John August:And so we're building out a lot more stuff. And that's a change that's happened over this time. Chris Sant does the newsletter called Interesting, which is sort of the little offshoot of Script Notes. That's a new addition. Some infrastructure changes. The whole reason I was able to find that audio was because we're just sort of consolidating everything onto a central server so we can sort of find where things are. Well, you make choices at the start of a project not knowing where it's going to evolve to. And so we were doing the blog posts for every episode the exact same way for 15 years, but it's not really the right way to do them.
10:03John August:And so we would post the episode and then we would also post the transcript later as a separate post. And it was confusing for people if people weren't finding it. So now we just update the main post with the transcript and we're going through and changing all the backup episodes so that they match that format. Well, there's only 750 of them, so it shouldn't take long. No. But I think the other thing we're doing differently now, and this is partly based on the script notes survey we did, is that people really like it when it's you and me talking. And so we're banking some episodes to make sure that even when you get too busy or I get too busy, that we have episodes with the two of us there.
10:38John August:So going forward, we're recording this episode several weeks ahead of when it'll actually drop because we want the two of us talking. I like that people still like the two of us talking. It would be such a bummer if their top answer was less of the two of you talking. Yeah, absolutely. That's all this is. We see you more as two solo acts rather than that. Yeah. We like Siskel or Ebert. But oh my God, the combination, the worst. It's just, I don't know. We don't like conversation. I want to spend a little time here talking about 2011. So we have a context of what we're going into because it's crazy.
11:11John August:So I decided some of those things in the intro. But Meredith, can you help us out? Talk us through. Let's start with the movies. What were the movies of 2011? Yeah, when I was looking through 2011, I realized, wow, it's kind of an incredible year. Just to list it off. Moneyball, Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows Part 2, as for mentioned. Crazy Stupid Love, Drive, The Untouchables, Captain America, The First Avenger, Pirates of the Caribbean, On Strange Tides, The Help, Bridesmaids, Thor, The Cabin in the Woods, X-Men First Class, The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo, Source Code, Limitless, Horrible Bosses, Shame, Super 8, Cars 2, Rio, Rango, No Strings Attached, Friends with Benefits, Midnight in Paris, The Lincoln Lawyer, The Hangover Part 2.
12:00Yeah, I remember that one. Contagion, Melancholia, The Descendants, One Day, The Adjustment Bureau, Mission Impossible, Ghost Protocol, Hugo, Tinker Tailor, Soldier Spy, The Ides of March, Scream 4, The Twilight Saga, Breaking Dawn, Part 1, Puss in Boots, 50-50, The Best Exotic Marigold Hotel, Jane Eyre, Young Adult, Bernie, The Muppets, Mr. Popper's Penguins, The Artist, which won the Academy Award, I believe, that year. Water for Elephants from Up on Poppy Hill and Jiro Dreams of Sushi.
12:36John August:The fact that like 95 % of those titles I recognize and I can picture and describe what happened in it, that was a crazy year for movies. And also just a regular year for movies. Yeah, exactly. That's how they worked. That's why, you know, we had careers in movies, because there was just a constant development and you could make all sorts of stuff. And you You could make things that cost$20 million,$30 million,$15 million,$100 million. It was all over the place. But you could do this because every weekend people would fill the movie theaters. Well, I think it's so great that we're starting with Moneyball there because of course we did a Moneyball episode, a deep dive on Moneyball, which is great.
13:14John August:And I think you look through that list of movies and there's some really good scripts underlying those really good movies. And I would say like Captain America, the first Avenger, like setting up really the template for what the Marvel franchise is going to be like. Yes, you had Iron Man separately from that, but this is what gets into a bigger, broader sense of how big the Marvel Universe could be. Horrible Bosses as an R-rated comedy. Hangover Part 2, a comedy sequel, which is not a thing we were commonly seeing. And then the smaller ones, like The Descendants, Best Exotic Marigold Hotel. There was just a whole range of movies that were successful in that time.
13:51Yeah, they had a whole range of things, and clearly nobody had a problem making all these movies, and they were making money making all these movies. And sometimes I think that when they say they can't make money making movies anymore, what they're really saying is we can't make as much money making movies in theaters as we can if we just make them and put them on streaming. The economics can't solely be, oh, people don't go to the movies anymore.
14:12John August:Because they do. They do. And 2026 is a great example of people going back to the movies. This has been a great year for movies as well, both creatively and financially. People have gone to the movies. and it's been terrific. This feels like the first year where it's actually almost as normal since COVID. Well, let's talk about television now because this was also a big year in television. Game of Thrones premiered. What? What? I'm sorry, what? Who is that? What is that? Game of Thrones premiered. Oh my God. Along with that premiere, American Horror Story, New Girl, The Voice, and Homeland. All great shows.
14:52John August:great shows that sort of, you know, defined moments. And went on and on and on from there. Absolutely. So American Horror Story became a franchise, Game of Thrones became a franchise. New Girl was iconic in its time. So many writers came out of the New Girl room. The voice adds a sense of like the big competition show. Homeland, again, great writing. A very difficult, damaged central character who you're following through things. Great. Out of curiosity, does, I think Jesse has become obsessed with New Girl. Is that a thing now? Like, remember when Jesse and Amy were both watching whatever it was?
15:26Bones or... They were watching the crime show.
15:28John August:Dangerous Minds. Dangerous Minds. No, Criminal Minds. You're absolutely right. No, it wasn't the Michelle Pfeiffer movie. Yeah. Like, is that a thing now? They're all watching New Girl? New Girl is definitely one of those shows that's in the repeat pipeline now. Like Friends and Gilmore Girls. And so as we're recording this, there is talk that there's going to be a revival or some sort of continuation of New Girl. Because why not? I mean, look, I'm cool. It makes sense. Like, discover all this good stuff. I love it. It's also the end of two big franchises here. Oh. Yep. Oprah ended her show after 25 years, and Regis Philbin retired from Regis and Kelly.
16:03John August:Regis Philbin. What a guy. Yeah. Regis Philbin. And there were series that were still in full swing. Yeah. At this time, Breaking Bad was still currently airing, Downton Abbey, Parks and Rec, Community, How I Met Your Mother, and Modern Family. All great. All great. And so many of those we've talked about repeatedly on the show. Modern Family, one of the best pilots ever in terms of like understanding what the show was from the jump. Breaking Bad right up there with one of the best pilots ever. Absolutely. I don't think we talked about Downton Abbey, but like such a good show for being what felt like a stuffy period drama, but it was just incredibly relatable and a soap opera and the ways that people love a soap opera.
16:46John August:We've had Parks and Rec. We've had Mike Schur talking about Parks and Rec, which also had growing pains and had to figure out its tone over the course of that first season. And that came back so much stronger in the second season. Community, come on. A great show. Joke density is so high. For a really questionable premise, could just keep generating story after story after story. And weird. Weird. Very, very weird. And influential, really. Yeah, definitely. So a great year for movies, a great year for television, and a great year to start a podcast about screenwriting and things that are interesting to screenwriters.
17:23John August:I thought, Craig, we might go back and answer our very first Script Notes question. Oh. I've not gone on to listen to our original answer, but Meredith has. So maybe we'll answer the question again and she'll tell us what was different about the two answers. Oh, that's awesome. Yeah, your very first Script Notes question was sent in by Andrew. I'm assuming one of you pulled it from a blog, I'm guessing. Yeah, I think so. It probably came in for me or for you. What are execs looking for from working writers who come in and pitch takes on assignments? I'd love to hear more about this and what strategies are important.
17:55Do you pitch problems with the script and then solutions? Do you pitch your own version and how you do it from the beginning as though you're pitching a new movie? Is it a conversation? What are they looking for?
18:06John August:So what Andrew's describing here sounds less like an open writing assignment and more like a rewrite job. Yeah. So let's have that be our premise. So Craig, you're going into for a meeting with an executive about a project. Talk to us about that conversation. So the overall goal would be, as always, to provide a grand sense of comfort that a doctor has arrived with a cure for your child's disease. It is important to acknowledge what you think is wrong, but it's equally important to not spend the whole time just beating up the script. And I never talk about the prior writer. I just talk about the script.
18:43and then talk about what is right and then talk actively and passionately about what would make this sing. So it's all about really putting your chips behind what gets you excited, what you're passionate for in a positive sense. And if you could do all that and they agree with you, then yeah, that should work.
19:06John August:Every bit of Craig's advice there is flawless. What you're doing is selling a positive vision of the movie rather than talking about the script as it currently stands. And so it's important to acknowledge things that didn't work or where you sort of fell off the story. But it's really about looking forward rather than looking back and sort of you're reminding them like why it's a good idea in the first place because likely what's happened is they loved this at some point and now they've fallen out of love with it. And it's getting them to re-spark the idea and spark your new vision for how to do it.
19:40John August:if they're meeting with you, it's because they think you might be the right person for it. So definitely try to continue with that momentum and find a good way to hook into what it is they're going to love about it. I would also say listen. Listening is a crucial part of any meeting. And so if they are telling you what they're not liking, make sure you're not pitching something that reinforces the things they don't like. And so sometimes even before you get into that meeting, you can get a read from your reps or from somebody else. This is what they're concerned about so you know where to steer the conversation early.
20:13What if our answers from back then were the same answers word for word? Like that if you play them on top of each other, you wouldn't be able to tell them. Well, I'm looking at the transcript right now and while they're not word for word, I think your previous selves would very much agree with your current selves. You basically are saying the same thing. Own the product, find the spark. John, you gave great advice. you said you should be able to talk about a movie like you're talking to your friend, getting them excited to go see it. So, yeah.
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20:45John August:Yeah. Any media like this is essentially a pitch and you're pitching a positive vision of what this is going to be and why they should go watch this movie with you. All right. Nothing has changed. We've not learned or grown in our wisdom at all. Possibly not. Well, so for some things that just have the right answer and that is just the right answer. If anyone has like a different answer for that, they're wrong. I mean, in a way, what we can say now is that we're right. Because back then, how long ago did we answer that question? 15 years. Oh, so that was from season one, so to speak. Yeah, first episode.
21:21First episode. Okay, great. So 750 episodes ago, 749 episodes ago, 15 years ago, we said something. And we're saying it now, and we've done pretty well over the last 15 years. That means we're right. Now we can actually start to say things like, we're right. Yeah. That's not an opinion anymore. Absolutely.
21:40John August:We're just correct. All right, we have a new question here, which just seems very relevant to this Kinita and Yara moment. Tom writes, I have a question regarding a feature film I'm working on. The story is a romantic drama that follows two people falling in and out of love over a 12-year period. What I'm struggling with is how to show the passing of time in interesting cinematic and visual ways without using title cards. Have you encountered this challenge in projects before? And how do you recommend going about it? Any thoughts, examples, ideas, or provocations would be massively helpful. Thank you for all you do.
22:18John August:All right. So passage of time, like we're going through, obviously, people themselves change. Their faces change, their bodies change, their clothes change. But I think the setting around you, the environment is probably one of the better ways of showing that time has passed here. So I had to do this a lot in Big Fish because we'd visit the town of Spectre three different times. And each time we visited, it looks vastly different. So it is, you know, this isolated town with no real road. And then there's a, it's more of a proper town with an asphalt road going through the middle and everything's fixed up really nicely.
22:52John August:And then finally, we see it in ruins there at the end. If you actually were to visit the town now, which is on an island in a river in Alabama, the ruined version is what's there now because that was the last thing we shot. So that's a case of the physical space has changed each time we've gotten there and that is helpful for showing the passage of time. Other situations, you may in an ongoing shot show things changing around it. And so that's the thing in a project I'm working on right now where in a continuous shot, we see time happening to a place and you see it weathering and falling apart and things happening.
23:26John August:So I would say look at the setting around an area for one way to indicate that time is passing. Craig, what are your instincts? Yeah, I mean, well, first of all, I understand sometimes why people just don't want to do subtitles, but you don't have to be afraid of subtitles either. They are basic. They also do the job very, very quickly. If you have to do it repeatedly, this is where you start to kind of almost need subtitles because it's hard to just keep doing tricks repeatedly. You could pick something that grows like a tree that gets planted. And then every time you come back, it's taller. You can, let's say it's two characters.
24:07This is a romance. It's over 12 years. I don't know if they move in together. I don't know what happens. But let's say one of them is always in the same place. One of them lives in a home and that doesn't change. And there's a baby across the street. And then you see that baby's a toddler and then the baby's a teenager. And you can do these things to sort of go, oh, got it. passage of time in an interesting way that doesn't involve, you know, subtitles or needle drops. When you think about Boogie Nights, like they really went for kind of needle drops. They went for music that actually helped move you along through yours.
24:40And it worked really good in part because the seventies and the eighties, that music transition was so jarring and crazy and fit the thematic shift so much. So things that grow are helpful, but you know, Well, some titles aren't the end of the world.
24:58John August:They're not the end of the world. Yeah. To speak as something that Craig fixates on often over the course of 15 years of the podcast, hair, makeup, and wardrobe. Yep. Different eras, different styles. You can show us there and we can get a sense of what that is. So we know what 70s clothes will look like, 80s clothes look like, 90s clothes. That will help cue things in. If you need to anchor to a specific year or moment, if it's not going to feel icky, you can do like, you know, So I had a romantic comedy where we were scrolling back through someone's Instagram grid and you sort of needed to feel like, okay, how long have they been together?
25:31John August:And you see like, oh, these are the photos where they're wearing masks, where like this is the pandemic. So you get some sense of like, okay, that's how far back this was. That may be a useful thing for you to think about too. I think the answer though is ultimately it's going to be specific to your movie. And if the choice for your movie makes sense to put on the subtitles or the little chyrons that show what year it is, great. If it doesn't, then find some cinematic way that feels appropriate to your storytelling. Yeah, it should have some connection. Think about it now. Boogie Nights, I think Paul Thomas Anderson used both titles and wardrobe, hair, makeup, music to move us through the years, as I recall.
26:11John August:Ultimately, you may find if you're hopping back and forth between these periods, you'll set different color schemes for the two things too. so that we can just instinctively know that we're in this time period or we're in this time period based on essentially the lookup tables and just how the film looks. They're just a different style for the different things. Some movies will go so far as to have different aspect ratios for the different times. Right. Whatever works for your specific story, do that. Let's try one more question. Charles writes, why does it take so bloody long to make a TV show or movie?
26:45I know every young punk probably thinks they can parachute in and cut some dead weight from the process and speed things up. But I get the feeling in this case, a lot of it might be necessarily slow. Where does the time go?
26:59John August:Oh, Craig, why can't you make your show any faster? Why do you make us wait for things? It's really a crime. I could. The simplest answer is that as television has evolved and certain shows, marquee kind of shows are big productions. every episode is movie-esque. So we shoot on a movie schedule. What we're reacting to is the difference between the television we grew up with and the television that is occurring now. Television we grew up with was network television. It was 22 episodes a year. Those episodes routinely would shoot three or four days. That's it. And they could because their scale was rather limited.
27:40Yeah. And when you watch, you know, a show like Ryan's show or my show or any sort of big production. We're working on a movie schedule because we are trying to deliver something that has a movie size to it, even if it's just one hour as opposed to two, but we're doing a lot of one hour. So The Last of Us will add up to, you know, four-ish movies over the course of a season, like we're this season. And that means it takes a lot of time because it takes time to prep a movie, it takes time to shoot a movie, and it takes time to post-production. Visual effects are the other big driver. Visual effects, if your show has a lot of them, are labor-intensive and time-intensive.
28:19So that's really what it comes down to is people are like, well, why does it take so long to make an Avengers movie? Everybody gets it. It takes time. Well, if it takes two years to make a two-hour Avengers movie, the fact that it takes two years to make a nine - or ten-hour season of television should not, it shouldn't be to the detriment of how we view television. is if anything, we're moving faster than one would imagine. But that's the answer.
28:48John August:So we recently had two of the creators of Hacks come on the show talking about making hacks. And one of the things I love about Hacks is like, there was a new season every year. And like, unlike shows that take all this time off, I asked them sort of, well, how are you doing this? And they're like, we just work constantly. We just basically finish the season, then we're starting a new season immediately. And so it's more like how we used to make traditional shows, except that rather than making 22 episodes per season, they're making 8 to 10 episodes per season. They're making it a movie quality.
29:18John August:It's a little bit shorter, but they're just continuously working. And they never took a vacation. They never had a break. They were just on the cycle, keep going. And they were delighted to be doing it. But it was just the grind of doing that. And these bigger shows, Craig, you're often doing kind of one thing at a time. Obviously, you're doing some writing at the start. You're going into production. You're doing editing while you're writing, but then you're finishing editing and visual effects at the end and then you're kind of done and then you have to start the next season. How much time do you think goes between kind of done and start the next season?
29:51I'm curious. How much time do you think happens? Two or three weeks. Two weeks. That's what I get, two weeks. The reason that hacks can be yearly is because their show is much easier to shoot. Because they're half an hour, right?
30:04John August:Yeah, they're longer than half an hour off. Okay. Yes, but they're more like a half an hour. They feel like a half an hour, yeah. So our show's twice as long. And also... You also have Fliving, you have zombies. Yeah, they're a comedy about real human beings. Yeah. And it's way easier to shoot. So when we have days that are like that, we shoot at the same speed I would imagine they shoot, which is we could do four or five pages of dialogue if it's two people talking, no problem. But then we have scenes where a horde of creatures attacks, you know, defended enclave. Yeah. That's the problem. And so as opposed to Buffy the Vampire Slayer, which also had big fight scenes and all these kind of things, but the standards of what it was trying to achieve cinematically were lower for good reason.
30:49Yes. I mean, their schedule compressed everything. So they understood there were certain things they were able to achieve with the money they had and the time they had. And really money is just time. Time is the resource. Like how much time does it take to shoot something up to a standard. So you can absolutely, like Veep is an incredible, legendary show. I don't know how long it would take them to shoot an episode of Veep, but when you're talking about working with your theater troupe pretty much on standing sets. Yeah. We're in the Situation Room, we're in the Oval Office, we're in our apartment, we're outside in this one spot.
31:25Even that, you've just eliminated an enormous amount of prep. The amount of prep time it takes to find new locations, build new sets, cast new actors, It's enormous. So again, that's the kind of thing that ultimately creates these huge delays. When I look at what some of these big shows do, I mean, the one that really, Fallout, they actually were quite fast. Yeah. And I think partly, I want to talk to them about this because I think some of it may have to do with some of their methods of shooting. But even then, I mean, it still takes, I don't know what the time was between Fallout season one and season two.
32:02I just don't want to look it up right now.
32:03John August:I think it's faster than a lot of these shows. I also, my hunch is that they were shooting multiple units. It's logistically a nightmare, but actually can get things done more quickly. Which we also do. So Fallout Season 2 was December 16th, 2025. Fallout Season 1 was April 2024. So it was like a year and three quarters, something like that. So it was not... Wasn't that fast? No, it was not that fast. It's not possible to do these things that fast. It just isn't. And I know it's frustrating for people. I think it's frustrating for everybody. But on the other hand, it kind of is what it is. Like, there's just no way to get there.
32:45Believe me, if we could do it faster, we would do it faster. I've been thinking a lot about Baldur's Gate and how to get back to the way Game of Thrones functioned. Because that, to me, was like a great balance. They figured out at least for the first, you know, they started. You could see how then, as they got to the end and things got bigger, they began moving towards the model that we have now. But let's call it the first five seasons of Game of Thrones. They were able to turn that around on a yearly basis, which is mind-blowing. And I want to sort of get back to that somehow, if I can. If I can.
33:19Yeah.
33:20John August:And I think we've probably talked about all 15 years of the show is that I don't remember when House of Cards came out where all the episodes dropped at once. But Game of Thrones, yes, it was only every year, but it took 10 weeks, 12 weeks to watch that first season. And so it had a bigger footprint because it was more time. It was less time off the air and it just stuck around a little bit longer. And, you know, we, for our show, the last visual effects have to be dropped in roughly, I think, five weeks before air date. So that means if we have nine episodes, while the first four episodes are airing, we're still finishing the show.
33:56It's scary.
33:58John August:Let's talk about our own show for a second in terms of like why things can turn around more quickly or can't turn around more quickly. And some of the stuff you're describing for The Last of Us also applies to script notes because our standards have also just gotten higher. If you went back and listened to that first thing we were recording, like it was John kind of editing this. The audio didn't sound so great. People were more forgiving of it back in its time. I remember Aline commenting like, oh, your audio sounds so much better than a lot of other podcasts. Because we did care. We got better as it went along.
34:25John August:but it wasn't great. The standards weren't so high. It was much more Buffy the Vampire Slayer than The Last of Us in those moments. But now that we're shooting video, there is more prep time. There's more post time. We need Meredith and Lauren to help get the things running right, partly because you and I are just so much busier than we used to be. We still do have our roots and let's sort of stretch our analogy. When we started, we were like the network television version of a podcast was pretty simple. It was a fast turnaround, low footprint, and all that. As time goes on, not only do we want it to sound better or work better, but other podcasts, the podcast world around us has become more and more like everybody's a CBS news bureau.
35:11And now every podcast seems to have that one dark room with the rectangle table. So we can be kind of sort of this an old throwbacky relic. but also we have to keep up a little bit with the trends around us. So that makes sense. Yeah.
35:30John August:All right. It's time for our One Cool Things. My One Cool Thing fits in very nicely with this nostalgia. This is a playlist created by Danny Carney. Drew Marquardt, our former producer, sent this through on the Slack and I think it's just delightful. He says, My friend Danny made a playlist of songs you'd hear buying cold medicine with your mom at Walgreens between 1988 and 1992. and it's so accurate, you feel like you ate nine Cadbury eggs waiting for the prescription to fill. Wow. And I think it's dead on. And so, you're looking at the list of songs here, Craig, and yeah, it's just, it's so uncanny because it's not only songs that came out during this time.
36:09John August:No. It's the songs that we'll be playing because the present moment is really just the recent past. Yes. And in a place like Walgreens, it's always looking backwards. to some extent. You know, they're not playing current hits really. So, like, Take It on the Run by REO Speedwagon is just perfect for that because that's like, that really is back eight years earlier than this or nine, you know, and that's about right. I can absolutely hear Against All Odds by Phil Collins. Of course. I can hear it playing on the speakers overhead. Oh, yeah. Baker Street by Jerry Rafferty. Dirt, dirt, dirt, dirt, dirt, dirt, dirt.
36:49Yep, that's, by the way, awesome song. awesome song. Oh my God, look at some of these. Yeah, for sure. Caribbean Queen. Caribbean Queen.
37:00John August:So, during our G &D games every week, Craig and other people will constantly refer back to music that they love or will play songs that they love. And weirdly, I've not heard of 90 % of them. It's so funny how people have specific memories of songs and things and like, there's things I miss out on. But this list, I definitely recognize. And we all know this list too but you know i think like there's so you know we play with tom morello so there's always going to be like some deep cuts on the rock end and a couple weeks ago we went down a pretty serious rush hole and we were we were it was like we were playing 21 12 which by the way is the worst way to introduce somebody to rush i have no idea you know listen to tom sawyer that's a great way to start but yeah we can get pretty crunchy on that stuff phil haye is also very he he goes he loves a deep cut and rock.
37:49Craig, what do you have for us? So this was an article that I read. It was a review in a magazine called Literary Review. And it's a review of a book called First Blossom in the Orchard, Earliest Stories, Stories, Novellas, Humoresques, 1880 to 1882 by Anton Chekhov. Oh, yeah. So it's a gathering up of early Chekhov Before he starts getting, as this reviewer, I believe this is John Stokes is reviewing here, before Anton Chekhov starts writing the things that he's famous for. So this is before Cherry Orchard and his sort of heavy relationship dramas. He's writing stuff, and this is what I just thought this was.
38:33I'm not even sure that this is a cool thing as much as a curious thing. he's trying to contextualize Chekhov's early work in a way that's meaningful and sort of revisionist because what his early work looks like is sort of a bunch of crap. It's like what they're kind of implying. So it says, this is often attributed to the pen name Antosha Cechante, which I guess is what he was going by then. The pieces are extremely varied in kinds. Satirical squibs, tenuously romantic novellas, dramatic skits and sketches, spoofs based on newspaper features. With hindsight, it would be easy to label this as apprentice work, but that would be to miss its significance at the time.
39:20And I was reading this going, wait, that's sort of what I did. And then it occurred to me like, okay, yes, I think what happens sometimes with literary theorists or critics is that they are looking for this grand design to things. But without knowing, I'm just going to go out on a limb here and say, He needed the work. He needed the work. This is what people were hiring to do. This is who would publish him. This was part also of what he liked. And as he grew up, he sort of changed his interest in things. But it is fascinating how even for somebody who's like kind of understood universally to be a literary genius, people who critique are like, but how do we make sense of the parts of this that were just funny?
40:07Like, that's also part of it. Yeah. That's part of it. It doesn't have to be viewed necessarily as some sort of like, but why? Anyway, I don't mean to imply that this is fully dismissive of that, but it is interesting to watch non-writers wrestle with the notion of writers changing because they don't understand. Yeah. So anyway, it's fascinating. Worth taking a look and see what people might think. Like, Craig, the first things you wrote,
40:37John August:like how many of those are still around? How many of those things can you find? Because one of the things we've been doing as we've been like trying to clean up johnaugust.com, the blog, is like I'm finding all these old blog posts I did. And it's like, oh, that's actually a really good post. And that reads like my voice, but I don't remember writing it, which is great and exciting. And at the same time, if I were a critic going through this stuff, I might ascribe intention to things that I really didn't have. because I was just writing and it's what I was writing at that day. Likewise, like the first things I was hired to write, like how to read fried worms for Imagine, I think it probably reads fine, but is it like a good reflection of who I am as a writer and what my goals were?
41:18John August:No, it was a job I could get. So it's that balance. How about for you? How much of your early work do you still see? Or could you find? I have all of it. Going back to the very first things and I can't open those documents. We had talked a little bit about how there's some sort of universal way to maybe open some of these things because they're ancient from ancient applications. But yeah, I've got it all. I've got it all. Some of these things, I don't even recognize having done. Like I've forgotten about them. And once I look at them, then I'm like, oh yeah, that's right. But man. So the first things I wrote, like in high school, we're on our old Atari, our old Atari 800.
42:01John August:and I don't have the disks for those anymore. I don't have the files for those. So there's a bunch of like, my high school writing is just lost forever. Oh, that's gone. Yeah, I don't know. And I would love to see some of that. I have some of the stuff I wrote for the newspapers there, but that's not really my writing in a meaningful way. So it's not until college that I have some stuff that is kind of recognizable as my writing. But it's early and it's imitative and I'm like trying to write in the voice of Spy Magazine. I was trying to find out how I write things. Yeah, it's funny. Also, I'm not very big on nostalgia.
42:35I'm such a look forward kind of person. So I never actually looked through this. And as I look through this, you know, crazy list of stuff over the years, I don't want to go back and read any of it.
42:47John August:Yeah, that's also very good. Yeah, yeah. There's a script as we were moving stuff onto the server that I read. And it's like, the writing is good. Like the words on a page are good. The storytelling is messy. but I recognize like oh I completely pilfered for this for this other project like I could see like oh I took that idea and reused it and this other thing and appropriate that's not plagiarism that's your own stuff yeah self-fievery self-fievery alright that is our show for this week it is produced by Meredith Stedman and edited by Matthew Cilelli with lots of help from Lauren Loesberg our outro this week is by Matthew Cilelli our editor if you have an outro you can send us a link to ask at johnagons.com that is also the place where you can send questions like the ones we answered today.
43:31John August:You'll find transcripts at johnaugust.com along with a sign-up for a weekly newsletter called Interesting, which has lots of links to things about writing. The Script Notes book is available wherever you buy books. Craig, 15 years ago, we did not know there would be a Script Notes book. No. No. We barely knew that this was going to be called Script Notes. Or that we would be doing it after four months. Yeah. That's wild. You can find Clips, another helpful video on our YouTube. Just search for Script Notes and give us a follow. You'll find us on Instagram at Script Notes Podcast. We have t-shirts and hoodies and drink wear.
44:00John August:You'll find those at Cotton Bureau. You can find the show notes with links to things we talked about today. In the email, you get each week as a premium subscriber. Thank you again to our premium subscribers. That's a thing we didn't have 15 years ago. Sure didn't. We had a few hundreds and a few thousand people listening to us. But now we have some folks paying us money each month. And that is why we have producers and coordinators and editors. God bless that. God bless them. And how many people do listen to us a month here at our 15th anniversary? Meredith, do you have a sense? You're getting tens of thousands per episode per week and so per month it would be higher.
44:34Yeah. Well, yeah. All right. Well, then I guess we'll keep going.
44:38John August:We're still bigger than Bon Jovi, Craig, which I know was your benchmark back in the day. We are the Bon Jovi of Bon Jovi. I never wanted to, I would never say bigger. All right. You can sign up to become a premium subscriber at scriptones.net where you get all those back episodes, back to episode one if you'd like and bonus segments like the one we're about to record on our predictions for 15 years from now in 2041. Craig, Meredith, Lauren, thank you so much for a fun show. Thank you.
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The year was 2011. We had Occupy Wall Street, Hangover II, 50 Shades of Grey… and a podcast named Scriptnotes. On this episode, John and Craig celebrate their podcast Quinceañera, marking fifteen years together on mic.
They reflect on their very first episode, the content and cultural moments that marked 2011, and everything that's changed since.
In our bonus segment for premium subscribers, John and Craig look forward fifteen years to make predictions on the year 2041.
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